Comments on: dil-e-naadaan kii qayaadat meN http://mohib.net/blog/2006/07/dil-e-naadaan-kii-qayaadat-men/ Personal Blog Of Mohib Ahmad Sun, 31 Oct 2010 18:15:09 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 By: Mohib http://mohib.net/blog/2006/07/dil-e-naadaan-kii-qayaadat-men/comment-page-1/#comment-96 Mohib Wed, 02 Aug 2006 20:52:44 +0000 http://mohib.net/blog/2006/07/dil-e-naadaan-kii-qayaadat-men/#comment-96 Nice try. Tresspassing is encouraged on blogs! Nice try. Tresspassing is encouraged on blogs!

]]> By: The illusionist http://mohib.net/blog/2006/07/dil-e-naadaan-kii-qayaadat-men/comment-page-1/#comment-87 The illusionist Sun, 30 Jul 2006 08:07:03 +0000 http://mohib.net/blog/2006/07/dil-e-naadaan-kii-qayaadat-men/#comment-87 Since you've provided the meter, I'm playing around too :) Forgive the audacity of the tresspass.... "yu.n har raah se naadani chun kar safar guzaara hai zahaanat mein" :) Since you’ve provided the meter, I’m playing around too :) Forgive the audacity of the tresspass….

“yu.n har raah se naadani chun kar
safar guzaara hai zahaanat mein”
:)

]]> By: Mohib http://mohib.net/blog/2006/07/dil-e-naadaan-kii-qayaadat-men/comment-page-1/#comment-81 Mohib Sat, 29 Jul 2006 09:46:05 +0000 http://mohib.net/blog/2006/07/dil-e-naadaan-kii-qayaadat-men/#comment-81 @ Adnan bhai zarra-navaazii kaa shukriyaa ! @ confused Yes, it is one of my better Ghazals, thanks. I did not like the discarded couplet, it was like this: tum bhii ho kyaa kisii kii qurbat meN ham bhii jalte the yuuNhii furqat meN qurbat : near; furqat : separation @ Adnan bhai

zarra-navaazii kaa shukriyaa !

@ confused

Yes, it is one of my better Ghazals, thanks.

I did not like the discarded couplet, it was like this:

tum bhii ho kyaa kisii kii qurbat meN
ham bhii jalte the yuuNhii furqat meN

qurbat : near; furqat : separation

]]> By: confused http://mohib.net/blog/2006/07/dil-e-naadaan-kii-qayaadat-men/comment-page-1/#comment-78 confused Sat, 29 Jul 2006 01:44:04 +0000 http://mohib.net/blog/2006/07/dil-e-naadaan-kii-qayaadat-men/#comment-78 Not bad at all! And why did you discard one couplet? Not bad at all!

And why did you discard one couplet?

]]> By: Adnan http://mohib.net/blog/2006/07/dil-e-naadaan-kii-qayaadat-men/comment-page-1/#comment-77 Adnan Fri, 28 Jul 2006 18:02:08 +0000 http://mohib.net/blog/2006/07/dil-e-naadaan-kii-qayaadat-men/#comment-77 Wah...dil-e-naadaaN ki qayaadat meN....pur-lutf she'r hai. doosra sher bhi umda hai, paRh kar ek dam se muskuraahaT sii aa gayii. Aur maqtaa achchha hai, umr kaT jayegi musaafat meN...nice and simple words but effective. Wah…dil-e-naadaaN ki qayaadat meN….pur-lutf she’r hai. doosra sher bhi umda hai, paRh kar ek dam se muskuraahaT sii aa gayii. Aur maqtaa achchha hai, umr kaT jayegi musaafat meN…nice and simple words but effective.

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